phew .........................
just finished my poster and tv ads for my school ads competition ...
I know my design are not good enough,
but i already try my best ...
so please dont tease on my design,
because u may have hurt my feelings,
but u may give some advice or other ideas or something else to let me improve..
Poster
Actionsampler
Documenting your shenanigans
Tv ads
Popobe
Your Personal Toy Bear
leave some comment ya ... =)
4 comments:
the action sampler one hor...
the colour is good...
not interesting enough lor...
the some picture's cropping not so good...
erm...
u cropped the characteristic of it already...
but its a good try for u...
and the words placing and the direction...
it is better if the word start with goes up from left to right...
or make it at bottom right of the picture...
the ad commercial one...
u still cant really send your messages...
erm...
the ways you show...
is good...
but it is not strong enough to let ur audience know what u mean...
its a good try...
as a secondary school student...
u done a good job already...
thanks kim .
the video u did it urself?
very cool eh.
:D
the poster average only lor.
i like the video.
:)
nice poster n cool video
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